Saturday, January 9, 2010

The writer-Blog-a-ton 6

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The Writer  (Blog-a-ton 6)



He sat on the bench that cold winter evening. It was past 6 and the sun began to set. Being the only regular visitor to this park, he loved it for sole reason that it provided the best solace to his lonely life. The park being  almost in ruins was rarely if ever was visited by anyone. He watched the sun set every evening hoping someday an end would come to all the miseries in his life. And this particular bench he sat that evening gave him the best view of the sunset as he wandered in his thoughts ranging from dismay to helplessness, helplessness to hope and hope to courage.

Life to him has always been an uphill climb. One huddle after the other he bravely faced and overcame. He felt so very depressed sometimes that he even considered to end it sometimes. But his aim that he made up in his younger school days kept him going.
‘Everyone in life should have a dream to follow. A dream that shall bring fulfillers to one’s life. And that dream shall lead you all your life’, his social studies teacher told him one day in school. These lines had a very stong impact on his seven year old mind.He pondered for a week to decide what his aim in life should be. One late Sunday evening he decided and wrote it down in the only note book he had,sitting  on the same bench he sat this evening, 15 years later.

This particular evening he felt low and at a loss of zeal to live his life. Problems to him were never new. He faced them right from the day he was born. Even before he knew what pain and pleasure meant.
He was an orphan, left at the footsteps of an orphanage, one cold winter night. He had thin clothing that barely could protect a year old baby from the freezing harsh cold. For how long he endured the cold that night nobody knew. When the caretaker-Rehman a stern, overbuilt, dark man in his early 30’s saw the life filled doll in shabby clothes, was only disappointed. The orphanage was running short of funds that insufficiently provided the children with one meal per day. But the moment Rehman held the baby he couldn’t ignore the mesmerizing smile and the twinkling glow in his eyes . He named him ‘Muskaan’ immediately and later added a prefix ‘Shiva’ when he saw a Shiva’s locket tied around the baby’s right wrist.

To respect all religions was he believed in. Since his duties as the caretaker taught him to be the guide, teacher, friend, father and also mother to the orphans. He made it a point that he would live a life of morals and values so that it had the right effect on the orphans whom he embraced as his own children. To see them grow, settle in their lives and live a life making the society better is what he strived for. Though Muskaan was a favorite of Rehman, life to him was not fair. Muskaan was a brilliant, hardworking student. His unadultered interest and sincerity in studies made Rehman take an extra step of kindness by sponsoring Muskan’s education. He spent more on Muskan rather than his own daughter Zubeena education.

Zubeena and Muskan studied together and belonged to the same age group. They spent most of the time together and it was no wonder the feelings of love bloomed from their friendship.
None was surprised when Muskaan made his confessions to Rehman about his love for zubeena. Rehman remained calm and heard to whatever Muskaan had to tell. But he was a father after all and had his own worries. He did not want his daughter to live a life of suffering as he did. Though it was hard for him he told Muskaan to leave the Orphanage at once and come back to ask his daughters hand when he settled in his life.  Muskaan left his home the next day.

After an year of complete struggle, Not finding any suitable job, he lost all the desire and hope to live. All the memories of the past surged in his mind, intensifying the pain in his heart. Muskaan had no choice but leave the park as the old watchman reminded him it was time to shut the gates of the park.Muskaan began to take slow steps toward the exist. He stopped, when the old watchman called onto him. You left your bag at the bench he said giving a  bag of books. Muskaan tried to tell him they did not belong to him. But the old watchman was in a hurry and told Muskaan that nobody ever visited the park apart from him. Muskaan had no choice but to take the books with him after finding no one in and around the park.

That night Muskaan out of pure loneliness and despair started reading those 7 books he found. Each page he read filled him with inspiration and every word with courage. The books had all kinds of stories…Stories of love, kindness, jealousy, fame, success, war and even death. As days passed on, Muskaan turned into a new man with more determination and optimism towards fulfilling his dreams.

3 years passed by. Muskaan was now married to Zubena and had a year old son. Rehman was only too happy to see them, taking care of the new orphanage and school Muskaan built. Muskaan planned to open a old age home soon. They were all happy with their lives. 

One day Muskaan while giving an interview for a national news channel, remembered about the books that inspired him to achieve his aim of building a school and orphange. That day he decide he would go and meet the author of the books that so influenced him.
He reached the address mentioned in the last page of every book along with the authors photo. An old lady in her mid 60’s told him to come inside when he inquired about Anthony. She bought him a photo of Anthony and asked him if it was about him he was asking for.

‘Yes that’s him, the author of the 7 books that changed my life’, he said.

What? He never wrote any books and Anthony left this world 25 years ago. He wished to become a writer. But he never could”, she said with tears in her eyes.
But I have the books with me, Muskaan told her. But when he tried to find the bag of the books he left in the car. He could not. He left the old lady with an apology.

2 years later, Muskaan became the author of 6 books that became the best sellers, read and loved by everyone around the world.

The day he finished the 7th book…he took all the 7 books in a cover and left them on the bench in the park that cold night. The next morning he came to saw that the books were no longer there. The old watchman told him that he was the last one to leave and first one to come since yesterday  and that he knew nothing about the books.

That day Muskaan left the park with a smile.

The last line in all the books that Muskaan wrote was,
“The dead have many stories to tell, nobody but Zubeena understood what he meant.







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35 comments:

Karthik said...

Six books in 2 years?! Whoaa!!
Well, Archana, that was a compelling story. A story after a long time I guess. Superb.
Suits well for the picture. :)
All the best!

Rocksa said...

Hello!

It would be many a writers's dream to write so many books in such a short span! A feat that would get them in books of record :)

Right said...the dead have many stories to tell :) It'd be nice if the story telling uncovers the way it has in your story.No nonsense story. Good luck!

Meenakshi said...

well written.. love story and an inspirational story beautifully intertwined..

Dreamer said...

Nice story. Good ending.

Anonymous said...

Hai Karthik!!
Yeah 6 books in 2 years must not have been a big deal given the fact that 'M' just reproduced what he read.Thanks for the comment...I couldn't edit it much though.Because I really ran short of time.
:~)

Hai Raksha!
Yeah a feat so rare...that's why 'M' is the hero of my story. Thankyou so very much for :~)

Hai Meenakshi!
Thanks so very much for the comment!!

Hey Dreamer!
Thankyou!!

санжог said...

I actually loved the story, it was like something Paulo Coelo would write.

full of serendipity. Although i donot believe in serendipity that much, i do believe in the flow of life, and if we keep our faith things do fall in place after all.

very well written. keep it up

oRange* said...

wow, i loved it yemiii :)

i wonder how u guys write such good stories! lovely

Saurabh Panshikar said...

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Oxymoron said...

well...now i know why you love gloomy stories....i guess if i get to read more such stories even i would star loving them...very compelling story...you know i am not a firm believer in happy endings but this is one of the rare occasions i actually liked it....will love to read more of your stories...

Nethra said...

I wish some dead comes to me to give his books to me. hehehe! I am kidding. :P
It was a nice story. :)

Sorcerer said...

hmm... Same lines of my fave author Paulo Coelho

looooved it:)

great work!!

Siddhesh Kabe said...

when will i write one book in 2 years??? 6 books in 2 years...now thats a writer with no block watsover!!!

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

Hey Archana... that was awesome... strong first entry to BAT...keep it up buddy!

Tavish
Latest blog post:All in a day's work part 2 - (Blog-a-ton 6)

Anonymous said...

Hai Sanjog,

I read some where that, "There are 2 ways to live life.One,as if everything is a miracle and the 2nd one as if nothing is a miracle. "

I believe in the former one. :)

Glad this one reminded you of Paulo Coelho. Paulo's Alchemist,Eleven minutes and The witch of portobello have a positive strong influence on me:)

Anonymous said...

@THankyou so muchfor the comment Sanjog

Hai Orange,
Thankyou!!!Why don't you try it too?? It's easy actually just a bit time consuming. :)

Hey Saurabh
Thankssssssssssss maaaannnnnnnnn!!

HAi Oxymoron

Hehehe..Actually you don't yet know why I like gloomy stories:P I like happy endings in reality and in fiction :~P
THanks so so much for the comment!!!

MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said...

That was a very inspiring story told so well. I liked it...

nil said...

Woah! Lots of books indeed!
Liked the post:)

Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said...

Hi......

from dismay to helplessness, helplessness to hope and hope to courage....

liked these lines and the fabrication of religion with emotions and nuances of life did strike well.....Well balanced narration.

Wish I can write one book atleast.. :)

Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said...

Yemiledantune.....chaala raasesaru....

BAT lo Telugu vaaru anagaane edo chinna conciousness, that too apna hyderabad aithe mareenu.
Inthaki sankranthi pandaga sambaraalu modalayyaya?

Sankranthi Shubaakaankshalatho..... :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

how come you can bolden the names of ppl you are replying to? Mereko bhi karna hai

MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said...

You have so much to say and you say "Yemiledu" ? :-)

Jokes apart, loved the story. It was well thought out, well constructed with a positive note from the get go.

Dead men do tell tales. Sometimes a lot better than the ones alive !

Anonymous said...

Hai Madhu!

A wink at the first line of your comment!
Thanks for the comment!
:~)

Anonymous said...

Hello Mahesh,
GLad you liked those lines. I am new to BAT and I just made up this story a few hours before the deadline. I actually had no idea that I would end up writing about religion and emotions until I wrote the last line. :~P
Your wish will come true for sure,if you really want it to. :)

Telugu lo comment chudamgane ado teliyani anandam. lol This makes me feel assured that I will have some reader even if I write something in telugu someday :~D

Sankranthiki antey 2 or 3 holidays to spend lazzziilllyy ,antey naku. Hope you are njoying the festive time.

Meeku Sankranthi subhakanshalu.
Kitessss baga egarveyandi!
:)

Anonymous said...

Hey Nil,
Hehe!!Thankyou!!!

Hey Saurabh
That's so easy!
I'l tell you in gtalk or mail okay!
:~) Inb/w I saw Karthik using bold letters for names. I copied him!!

Anonymous said...

Thankyou Nethra. You have a nice name! And hope someday gives you a unpublished book ;-)

Sorcyyyy
Thankyou!!! I am on cloud 9! :~)

Hai Sid
Hehehe! Thankyou for the comment!

Gauri said...

Lovely story!

btw, what does Yemiledu mean?

Good luck for BATOM6! :)

Jaunty anima said...

Fantastic writeup...

dead have many stories to tell....fantastic!!

Shruti said...

Hey a very good write up and matched exactly with the picture :)

Pushpz said...

very touching and beautifully told...

aativas said...

Yemiledu? What does it mean? Must be something very nice is just a guess!

Prashansa said...

A really nice story. Just as a curiocity..and if I am counting it correctly ..did Anthony died when Muskaan Shiva bourn? Is that the connection between finding the books?I liked all your quotes about hope,life and dreams.

Anonymous said...

Hai Pra,
Yes dear you got the count and my thought right.
Muskaan could be the reincarnation of Anthony, this was the idea on which my whole story was based on. But not many noyiced tha.
lol
Thanks for the comment!

HelloAativas,
Hmm..I am afraid it may not imprees you much when you know the meaning. :)
It just means 'Nothing' in Telugu.

Hai Shruthi,
Thankyou so much!!!

Hello Jaunty anima
Thankyou so much!!Glad to see your comment on my story!!

Hey gkam,
Thankyou!!
Yemiledu means 'Nothing'.
:)

buckingfastard said...

@yummyladdu:nicely written!! luvd da concept of ghost courier service!!! :P

Mural! said...

nice story, good concept....!
funny how i am coming across quite a few of these friendship-turned-love stories these days...... there are many other ways to fall in love too! :D

Anonymous said...

HaiSatan
Thanks!

HelloMurali
Friendship turned love story could be written in few words and I kept a account on the words of this story...