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Here goes my failed attempt at writing a 55 fictioner...It ended up being 55+119 words long LOL.
"No matter what I will be done with him today", she told her colleagues with vengeance evident in her bloodshot red eyes.
'All set’, She thought and tried to sleep that night hoping all is gonna end by the time she woke up.
It was 5 in the morning. With footsteps as light as a feather she carefully and silently went in to her kitchen and switched on the light.
What she just saw made her beam with a smile.
But in a fraction of a second all her smiles vanished and she stood dumbstruck watching the act that was so unbelievable. Jumping up and down and on freeing himself from the trap, the rat escaped into the creeks of the cupboard to be seen nowhere.
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1) Hey Sru akka..this one is in found memory of the cute rats in your home.
2) Hey Varun(Sarkari babu) and Saurabh...this one is for you people for reminding me about the BAT :~)
20 comments:
Thanks for taking it up...
Till the end I was wondering who is escaping...
But I feel you can do better...
That naughty rat escaped in the end, smart him! Nice post.
Sureindran R. - Escape
hey buddy ...
interesting post...
liked it...
simple but splendid...
liked the end with twist...
quite a u turn it made...
nice one buddy :)
PS: Guess u remember me :)
ha ha ha..
I can't escape laughing and the feedback!
Nice "comic" post... Liked it...
~ Keep the spark alive ~
Cheers LIFE
JD
Excellent topic. One of the uniquely different takes on the topic 'Escape'. One of my favorite movies was one called 'Mouse hunt'. But I feel you kept it too short. You had scope to make it longer and really dramatize.
Nice one archana...good attempt...its ok abt the words dear...but the thought is good..!!!
very interesting post! :) u could call it a successful attempt at a 174fiction instead! :)
thanks for the read! all the best for batom! :)
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@ Saurabh,
:~) Was feeling really very lazy to write anything..so thtas how it ended up. Thanks for the comment :)
@Battula Moshe C..
Good work..Will go through your blog.
@Sureindran,
Yup! Thanks for the comment.
@Mahesh Kalaal,
Hai! Thanks for the comment! Yeah I do remember..busy with that and this these days so havent been bloggng much lately.
@Jayanta Deka,
hai..Thanks for the comment!
;~) Happy You found it funny.
@ The FOOL,
Hai..thans for the comment...Mouse hunt..hmm I will watch it sometime...
And about keeping it longer...I wanted it to be 55 words long so..thats is how it ended...
Hey thanks for the comment :)
@Yamini,
Thankyou Yamini!! Yup its all about the words :~)
@Leo,
Hey thankyou so much.
But I have to tell you something.
That was actually 55+114 words long...err I am bad at maths ;~)
arre dunt worry...wenevr u cross word limit name it as a new category...as in urs is an innocative 175 fiction...and u kept it well short by 6 words!!! kudos!!
Hahaha! It was a rat story and I was wondering what, who and how the escape is gonna happen.
Nice one. :)
A classic rattatouille incident. short and compact...liked it.
haha, a light hearted read, good! :)
55+119=??ya 174! so just name it 174-errr :P
the rat was escaping from the story till the end...very nice
Serious start with a funny end!!
Nice.. I'm blushing... nice end... heehee..
Haha! This is hilarious! :D
At first I thought she was trying to get rid of her abusive boyfriend (who was trying to kill her... hehehe!). But it was the rat! lol!
Loved this,
it made me smile.
Best of Luck for Blog A Ton!
Hey that was a cute post. I was racking my brains thinking who was this about :) Loved your 55+119er :)
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Will come back for more :)
lol.. gr1 one thr.. evry1 is busy writing about suicides and gory stff and ur post cums a a whiff of fresh and hilarious air.. gud attempt at 55 Fiction.. bt jus mised :p
wow, deep ! :P
the thoughts are awesome :)..
urs..hemu..
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